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Post by evanbodom on Dec 10, 2011 3:12:24 GMT -5
I know i'm the "Darkhorse" here since no one knows me. So just let me know what you think. Either PM me or post it here.
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Post by Adam James on Dec 10, 2011 10:22:50 GMT -5
Not a bad first RP at all. You did a solid job of addressing the background of Evan Bodom, something that I feel is important for all of us. Hopefully you continue to reveal a little bit more about Bodom as time passes onward, as I could see him becoming an interesting character here in FGA. As for the heart of the RP, it was solid. I felt like you could have spent a little more time on Harvard Connection, but at the same time I am reminding myself your knowledge of them is limited. So with what you have, in terms of knowledge, you did a good job. Just make sure to proof read your material before you post (can't believe I, of all people, just said that) and you will save yourself from losing a few points to spelling/grammar errors when Terr goes around to judge. Keep it up man!  |
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Post by tnw on Dec 11, 2011 2:04:55 GMT -5
Solid stuff, Evan. Can't wait to read more from you.
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Post by Chandler Scott on Dec 12, 2011 20:50:56 GMT -5
Good stuff. Best of luck to you.
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