Vinny
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Post by Vinny on Mar 28, 2012 21:49:20 GMT -5
That's Spanish for "The Feedback."
If you've taken the time to read my first RP, "We're Gonna Need A Montage" (http://fgawrestling.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=rp2&action=display&thread=483&page=1), and if you have any thoughts I'd love to hear them.
This character is new(ish) for me, and I'm still trying to feel out the balance.
Thanks, True Believers. - Vinny
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Post by jjg on Mar 29, 2012 13:23:33 GMT -5
All in all Vinny, I'd say it was first class. Very easy to read and it flowed very well. I look forward to seeing more of you in the future. Love the character man
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Post by Deleted on Mar 30, 2012 11:40:59 GMT -5
You didn't use enough big words that had me scrambling for my dictionary.
Otherwise I laughed, I scowled, I genuinely hate Sean Fallon more than I ever have. Keep it up, big boy. Keep on truckin'. Keep doing what you're doing.
I shall criticise you further when you slip up.
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