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Post by Stephen on Mar 16, 2012 17:03:04 GMT -5
My Road to Redemption #1Hey guys, This will probably be one of those rare occasions that I'll be able to put up two roleplays and I wanted to know how you all felt about my first one. I'm going to be building on a couple of things from this roleplay for the second one as well so I'd like to hear what parts you might have liked about it. Thanks =)
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Post by Micky O'Reilly on Mar 16, 2012 17:09:06 GMT -5
I have a couple of notes but as usual I'm going to wait until after the match so as not to unintentionally influence anything for better or worse. Also I wouldn't wan't to assist my opponent until after I beat them  |
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Post by Stephen on Mar 16, 2012 17:39:40 GMT -5
Understandable haha. I'm looking forward to our match though.
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Post by Stephen on Mar 20, 2012 2:01:30 GMT -5
My Road to Redemption #2I've had fun with both of these roleplays this week. Yeah, the roleplaying styles are different for each one but I felt the perspective for each needed to be expressed differently for some reason. I'm probably going to use the second roleplaying style more often though. Anywho, just want to know what you all ultimately thought of what I've produced this week. Like Jacques, I'm trying to get better by learning from my mistakes so any comments/suggestions/concerns would be greatly appreciated and beneficial.
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Post by Micky O'Reilly on Mar 20, 2012 3:12:12 GMT -5
As promised I'll post as soon as the results are up and I'm online, leaving for work so only had time to scan through number 2, will read properly tonight. Really looking forward to the results, I honestly wouldn't like to place bets on the outcome, I think it's too close to call but I'm sure Terr will come to a decision. Good luck man
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Post by Micky O'Reilly on Mar 22, 2012 16:03:31 GMT -5
Congrats on the win mate, as promised here's what I think.
Writing ability and content I think you're one of the best writers here, you always have interesting angles and your trash talk/ match relevance is excellent, far better than mine.
The only thing that lets you down for me is silly mistakes that slightly dull the polish, mainly spelling (especially opponent names) grammar and every now and again you seem to miss words. Also I like to read my opponents last 2 rp's before starting so that there is material you can use against them and you have a general idea of where they're going with the character.
In essence all you need is to do a bit more research on opponents and spend a bit more time proof reading and you'll be at the top of the roster.
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