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I rarely ask, but does anyone have any comments on my roleplays so far?

Is Blaine believable as a face and an underdog?
Are the secondary characters anywhere near fleshed out enough? Or at least nearing.
Do I need more description? Less description?
Is the inner-monologue/narrative good or bad?

[Chandler Scott]

1 - I think Blaine is believable
2 - So far, so good.
3 - What you're doing right now is fine, I'd say.
4 - It's good. It kind of sets you apart from everyone else. The only other person who really does it here is Scott Reave.

BTW, I liked the mock Behind The Music roleplay.