Jason Bronco Feedback

[Vinny]

Start the Future Part I: Born in a Long Shadow

So Jason Bronco is a brand new character for me and essentially the polar opposite of what I've been doing for the past 3 or so years with Malcolm Drake. I'm still trying to feel out the character, but I wanted to know what anyone/everyone thought. Good, bad, meh, etc.

Thanks also to John for helping me with fleshing out the character backstory in his RP this week.

And thanks in advance for the feedback.

- Vinny

[Vinny]

Start the Future Part II: Sins of the Father

Little more meat to this one, so hopefully y'all are getting a better idea of the character/story/direction. Any feedback would be appreciated; especially the critical stuff.

- V