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Post by Jimmy Jam on Mar 18, 2015 6:11:12 GMT -5
I've been having an internal debate about asking for feedback. Only because my real life is hectic and it's affecting my writing. Oh, well. Please, be gentle. lol
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Fujiko Mine
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2018 & 2019 Wrestler of the year, 2020 Hall of Fame
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Post by Fujiko Mine on Mar 19, 2015 15:40:28 GMT -5
As someone who has heard of the character, this was a nice and interesting introduction to him. I thought it helped frame who he is at present. Showed me a little of what drives him. And it covered his feelings on his opponent nicely. Wasn't a cliche heel promo, so that was also a plus.
I'm an amateur at giving feedback, but I certainly liked the piece. Made me want to know more about the character.
Excited to see what you do this week.
^_^
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Post by Jimmy Jam on Mar 20, 2015 10:06:08 GMT -5
Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it. I'm stepping way out of my comfort zone with his evolution.
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