Shaking Off the Rust

["The Antagonist" R.J. Palmer]

So this was my first role-play since around January/February, and feel like I have some rust. If you have any thoughts, feedback, praise, or negative comments, I'd like to hear them. I'm a grown man, I can handle all comments. If I hope to shake off the rust, some feedback might help

But most of all.. What did y'all think?

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If this is you rusty then I'd hate to see you on your game.

Keep doing what you're doing.