Koolstorm

[The Rogue]

As you are all aware, the sole purpose of Koolstorm is to be cannon fodder for Tomkins. They either serve as a distraction for him to escape, or for Dan Thornton to hit someone hard. They aren't exactly Main Event caliber.

This allowed me to have some fun pointing this out with as much comedy as I could. Yes, a lot of it is stupid. A lot of it is different and it doesn't exactly fit into the mould of what constitutes a normal rp.

that being said, what did everyone think?

[Jerry]

So, I actually liked it a lot.

i have no idea what you were trying to do with the narrator voice, so after I read it a bit... I imagined the narrator from a game that I once played called The Bards Tale, a Monty Python type rpg.



Anyways that made it work for what I imagined...

Honestly, I liked it. I know it's got to be hard to suddenly be thrust into a role play for some sidebar characters for Tomkins, but I thought you did very well with them. Great tie in with the movie.

I just now have to go back and rewrite the shoot stuff I did on the airplane yesterday via my iPad notes... Half if it is useless now.