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Post by Deleted on May 27, 2013 12:00:33 GMT -5
So how was my first FGA rp in a while? Any comments? Ideas?
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Post by Jerry on May 27, 2013 12:13:40 GMT -5
My only fear was when I first opened it up was that the scenery at the beginning looked loooong. Just my thoughts long opening scenes can really cause me to lose interest fast, but you did a bang up job if making it flow very well and I didn't feel the need to skip to dialogue. Well done sir.
Great dimension with the story of dimension and the last few paragraphs directed to Drake - loved it.
Nice sprinkling in of western civ history. I was a history major in college, are you one as well?
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Post by Jerry on May 27, 2013 12:14:15 GMT -5
That should say story of redemption... IPad autocorrect
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Post by Deleted on May 27, 2013 12:47:59 GMT -5
Nah I'm a comm major
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Post by Deleted on May 27, 2013 15:34:40 GMT -5
I know of you from history, and I know people Like Bond, Benny and Bob and I have to say, you and Chris Q are priceless.
Excellent work and I am happy to be apart of a efed where I see work from you.
Can't wait to see more..
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