J.T.Cash
Newcomer
Everything You Will Never Be!
Posts: 43
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Post by J.T.Cash on May 10, 2013 10:06:53 GMT -5
Howdy all, i was just wondering if i could get some feedback on my roleplays, particularly my most recent... i've been playing a heel for so long and have not been roleplaying for some time i need to see what i am doing right and more importantly wrong.
Really enjoying writing again but i do want to fine tune the cash face character.
Cheers all
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The Rogue
Established Name
The-Raise-The-Bar-Superstar
Posts: 330
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Post by The Rogue on May 10, 2013 14:20:04 GMT -5
I like how you have written the bad guy gone good. I was tired when I read it so cant pick any negatives up. Flowed well. Solid rp imo
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Vinny
Headliner
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Post by Vinny on May 12, 2013 0:22:37 GMT -5
Ditto. I thought overall the quality was there, but it's really hard for a rich guy to get the face pop especially when things are still pretty shitty for a lot of people economically. If you can find a way to distance your character from that past both as a bad guy and as a silver-spooner I think you'll find writing as a face to be very easy, fun and rewarding.
My advice is to find the one thing that you hated that your babyface opponents could do when you were a heel and do exactly that with Cash. For me when I was writing Patrick McCarthy, I hated that bad guys had no repercussions. They could lie, they could cheat, they could take every shortcut and they always had some twisted justification for it. That's what I'm doing now with Drake. I lost like 4 straight matches because I no-showed a bunch, but Drake is all like "Oh that? I didn't lose. It was part of the plan, and you're too stupid to realize it." So find that annoying thing that faces do and DO THAT.
Really solid work this week, Cash-man.
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