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Post by Deleted on Feb 18, 2013 1:24:06 GMT -5
So I've posted part one of my two PHE roleplays. What do you guys think about it?
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Post by shaunsindelman on Feb 18, 2013 10:30:16 GMT -5
To be honest, the font's too small and the entire thing too long for me to truly read.
Sorry this is the first feedback you get and it's not helpful but just speaking the truth.
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Post by thelion on Feb 22, 2013 21:30:30 GMT -5
I read your Warrior King RP. You probably used the term Upper Crust a bit too heavily and it could have been a bit. Otherwise yeah, it's a good, solid piece. It pertained primarily to your opponents, your character, and everything contained there in. Good work man.
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