Dom Harter Feedback

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I wanted to try something new, I saw an interview HHH did with The Masked Man and I sought inspiration from it. I didn't know about the footnotes though lol

The comment about being nearer was supposed to be dry humour, it must not have worked. The truth is I asked for this match to be tacked onto the end of the joint show, I see now that would have been unwise considering the quality of the iron man match. But I'm on hiatus from rp'ing to ward off this burnout and yeah, my work sucked this week. It was also the last rp I'll probably be writing as Ben and I wanted to use that title shot I won last year.

When I return as Dom I'll try and do better

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BUMP! Any advice/feedback anyone is willing to give me on recent Dom rps, please?

[Cordy]

Nope, cause I refuse to tell you how great you are. You already know!

[Vinny]

I haven't been reading them with the nit-picking critiquing eye I usually use when providing feedback, and I know it can be frustrating to just have people "Nope, you're good, bro!" and that's it. But honestly I can't think of any substantive criticisms. Sometimes they're a little long and often there's a lot of moving pieces/story-threads to keep track of, but that's about it.

I often get lost trying to figure out who Dom's sleeping with this week, but other than that you already know what I think of your writing abilities and of Harter as a character. So yeah, "you're good, bro!"

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So...keep on keeping on?

[Vinny]

Essentially, yes.