Feedback for San Jose DVD Taping

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First off, thanks to Terr and Bondo for helping out with the scores.

Thanks to Paully for writing Dan/Alastor, Dion for writing Cami/Noelle and Terr for writing Annie/Chandler, Johnny/Johnny and Tony/Cordy.

Thanks to all of you that were able to contribute segments for this show. I can't remember all your names, there were just too damn many of you ... it almost brought a tear to my eye.

And thanks to everyone that RP'd.

Also, apologies for the quality of the Evangelista/Zero match. You guys deserved better, but I'm running on empty right about now.

Feel free to leave any feedback below.


[b]Match of the Show:[/b]

[b]Favorite Segment(s):[/b]

[b]Most Memorable Moment(s):[/b]

[b]Wrestler of the Show:[/b]

[b]What Do You Think Happens Next:[/b]

[British Body Shotz]

Thank you Benny, for how you wrote Jason. Pitch-perfect. I'm moved. Sorry I was difficult to deal with at times.

More feedback to come at a later point - just wanted to leave that there.

[LΞCAVALIΞR]

Match of the Show:
-For me, I enjoyed Cordy vs Tony, and Jimmy vs Fujiko. All the matches were good as usual, but those two in particular that resonate with me the most.


Favorite Segment(s): 
-The Gambino/McHannon/Jimmy segment was interesting. I've seen a lot of Gambino in my time over at HKW. Over there, he sometimes comes off as annoying. Here, however, because he was used in a limited role, I think he came off well. Jimmy damaging McHannon was interesting.

-Johnny Cannon's segment was also pretty interesting.

-And of course, I'd be remiss if I didn't make reference to the closing segment of the show. Very well done.


Most Memorable Moment(s):
-Annie turning into Don West to hype up the PPV

-Although he got busy and wasn't able to bring his best, it was good to see Dan get a win. When I was away from FGA and I'd come back to read show, I'd always see Dan lose. That made my heart sad. So, it good to see him doing well and winning a bit more.


A Small Critique: Forgive me for this critique, it is only meant to help.
-The end of the Cannon/Karma match: The match overall was good, but the ending stands out as a "memorable moment," but not in a good way. The finishing sequence was this: a sucker punch, a Burning lariat from Cannon, the Cannon Driver II, and the Roundhouse. Now, imagine the intention was to show that Karma was tough and they it took a bunch of effort to put Karma away. However, I'm not sure if that's how it comes off to the reader (or, at least to me in the very least). It kind of comes over as Karma got booked with a bunch of moves and then lost.

Now, a simple way to correct this issue would have to have Karma "hulk up, or show a bit of "fighting spirit" right before the roundhouse kick. That would have a really drove home the point that, even in losing, Karma is tough (which could have also played into the PPV match).


Wrestler of the Show:
-Cordy
-Other Notables: Jimmy, McHannon, Chandler, Fujiko, Annie


What Do You Think Happens Next:
-The Mid-Atlantic Match up should be really good. That's one that I'm excited for.

-FGA Championship Match: Chandler has been great as a champ; and his match with Cordy should be good. I'd like to see Cordy take the match; but hey, they will be determined by the RPs.

-Jimmy vs HcHannon is money to me. I'm sure how long the two are going to carry this out, but I enjoy it.

-I'd like Mia Scott to get at least one title defense, but that's just me.


Overall:
-It was a very good show. Hope this review helps a bit.

[Yun Goeun]

I'll give some full feedback later when I am more awake. But I wanted to touch on something Jason said up there also. You guys do an amazing job writing Yun more or less how I pictured her in my head when I made up the character a few years ago. I *THINK* it is usally Spiro? Because he also wrote her matches in PDW and yah. She's been portrayed awesome by ya guys here. <3

Also Benny, Evangelista/Zero was good.
Just gave it a read, could tell you had a bit of a block due to the lenght, but it still read very well and flowed nice.

[Jensen Banks]

I wrote a match or two with your char in it, yes. Especially in PDW.

[Chandler Scott]

Jul 12, 2015 10:43:03 GMT -5 LΞCAVALIΞR said:

-FGA Championship Match: Chandler has been great as a champ; and his match with Cordy should be good. I'd like to see Cordy take the match

[Yun Goeun]

Jul 12, 2015 15:08:04 GMT -5 Jensen Banks said:

I wrote a match or two with your char in it, yes. Especially in PDW.

[Cordy]

Jul 12, 2015 11:58:31 GMT -5 Yun Goeun said:

I'll give some full feedback later when I am more awake. But I wanted to touch on something Jason said up there also. You guys do an amazing job writing Yun more or less how I pictured her in my head when I made up the character a few years ago. I *THINK* it is usally Spiro? Because he also wrote her matches in PDW and yah. She's been portrayed awesome by ya guys here. <3

Also Benny, Evangelista/Zero was good.
Just gave it a read, could tell you had a bit of a block due to the lenght, but it still read very well and flowed nice.

For some reason, Yun was (and still is) one of my favorite characters to write matches for lol.