Feedback for Pedro Gonzales. Free pancakes inside.

[Anna]

Mmmm-kay.  Allow me to be completely honest when I say that I'm not completely sure what I'm doing good or shitty anymore.  Maybe it's the semi-rustyness in my head still, maybe I'm overthinking it, whatevs.  Or I might just need to write moar things (which I plan to if I can get myself outta my blah for a moment).

So anybody whose read my crap...all five of you...point out things and tell me stuff.  And yes, you will get pancakes.

[El Grandé Malo]

You're doing better than your suck-tabular partner lol

But in all seriousness, I've really liked your work thur far. It's challenging to write within the word contracts we have, but you've done well working within these boundaries. You manage to get me to understand up your character, motivations and still get in some good trash! Keep it up!

[Anna]

I still love ya, buddy.



But yeah, that word count can be a pain in the ass on occasion. Yet that's part of the reason why I signed up. It's nice to have a challenge and condensing all the madness in my brain to eight hundred words in a semi-coherent manner with a character I never fully tested the waters on definitely is one.