Tritch.
Making Waves
The Avatar of Brutality, and his babysitter
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Becky
Oct 20, 2015 16:23:26 GMT -5
Post by Tritch. on Oct 20, 2015 16:23:26 GMT -5
I don't see a lot of non-show feedback in here so hopefully this is okay.
Just wondering if I could get some feedback on the progression of my character from anyone who has been following the Becky: An Origin Story saga. There's only been one actual role play so far and the shoot was very short and subpar, but I just want to know what people think of the character so far. If she's believable and progressing naturally etc.
Much appreciated in advance.
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Becky
Nov 8, 2015 15:28:13 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Nov 8, 2015 15:28:13 GMT -5
They say a picture is worth a thousand words, so... But as a serious feedback, you've progressed her nicely, setting up her motivations for wrestling, giving her a humble origin story, while allowing for further progression. Nice work.
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