Jimmy Page

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INCREDIBLE!!


That's all.

[James Joseph Page.]

Thanks, I really do appreciate that. =)

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Don't mention it. Love all your work but the latest really blew me away. Kudos, good sir.

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Page has some real problems. I'm sure if he asked Max, he could get him into see a really good psychiatrist.

I loved both rp's this week bro. You had me smiling with each read and amazed at how well you portrayed your character. The quality of your CD pieces are something that I strive to produce. It was a blast and an honor facing you this week. Being in the main event in only my third week against one of this fed's champions is something that I can't and won't downplay. It was my honor and my privilege sir, and best of luck this week. I can't wait to work with you again in the future.

I sound like a damn broken record here, but I would just continue to watch out for spelling mistakes. They drive me bat-shit crazy, and you had a few. No one is perfect, and you can't catch them all, but I think that another proofread over each rp would have made them almost perfect. A phrase or two were weird to me as well. For example:

She was a pretty lady, really nice, made me feel good.

This sentence just reads odd to me. Still does. The 'made me feel good' almost feels like it needs a word or two before it. Call me a retard, or completely off my fuckin' rocker, but it's what I thought.

I “HOPE” you’re ready to be their fuckin’ myrtar, because they need one.

I got what you meant, but it was enough to make me read it twice and you're so much better than that.



As with my other feedback, I'm not here to nitpick anyone or to pretend that we all don't make mistakes. I just know that when people pump out rp's with your quality, it's the only thing that you can fix to get better. I have this feeling that if you're anything like a lot of people I know in this game, that you're always trying to get better. I think if you would have read this out loud to yourself, you would have caught both of those. Maybe it's just me. It is just an opinion, so it's not like it matters. I don't judge matches, and I'm not in charge of arresting people for mistakes, so at the end of the day does it even matter?

Once again, fuckin' downright fantastic work this week. Thank you for the opportunity.

[Bondo]

Mar 7, 2014 22:34:24 GMT -5 @jcice said:

She was a pretty lady, really nice, made me feel good.

This sentence just reads odd to me. Still does. The 'made me feel good' almost feels like it needs a word or two before it.

IMO, this sentence reads like Page himself was saying it. It may have appeared in his head, I can't recollect the exact details and I'm just going off from the line you quoted, but this appears to me to be him speaking. It's his vocabulary, his articulation. To me this sentence screams Jimmy Page... but I could be looking into it too much and this was merely a gramatical error.

#twocents

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Mar 7, 2014 22:34:24 GMT -5 @jcice said:

Maybe it's just me. It is just an opinion, so it's not like it matters. I don't judge matches, and I'm not in charge of arresting people for mistakes, so at the end of the day does it even matter?

I don't really know anyone here and I haven't really been around long enough to get familiar with everyone's work. That's why I feel iffy about giving feedback, but I always try to leave it for those who leave it for me.

[Bondo]

No offense sir, I was just trying to articulate another view point, so maybe it wouldn't appear so odd.