Post by Deleted on Sept 7, 2013 20:16:32 GMT -5
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Now I know what you all are probably thinking. "Why is the guy asking for feedback when he hasn't even posted a promo yet?" Its definitely a good question to ask and my answer is: I'm not.
Anyway, Porky, one of my members in Ward 6, is a completely new character, with no back story other than the five paragraph bio on his application page. Plus, instead of developing him in a single company, I'm going to be using Porky in various of these indie-styled federations. Thus, I may be making developments with Porky on an entirely different board, and unless you frequented the other places I'm in (some of you are), you may miss the "good stuff"
Thus, I've decided I'm going to post links on a feedback thread so that anybody [who cares] can click on it and keep up with the directions I take Porky, even if they aren't a part of the e-fed I'm posting in.
I will say this: this promo is important for two reasons. The first because it explores Porky and who he is as a character, which will help people understand. And the second reason is mostly important to me because its the first promo I've written with Porky. NvL just celebrated his second birthday a few weeks ago, but Porky is a fairly new creation.
Thus, read if you wish, and I'd love to hear your feedback for this one especially, since its my first one with a new character and all.
And be sure to expect many more of these posts.
Now I know what you all are probably thinking. "Why is the guy asking for feedback when he hasn't even posted a promo yet?" Its definitely a good question to ask and my answer is: I'm not.
Anyway, Porky, one of my members in Ward 6, is a completely new character, with no back story other than the five paragraph bio on his application page. Plus, instead of developing him in a single company, I'm going to be using Porky in various of these indie-styled federations. Thus, I may be making developments with Porky on an entirely different board, and unless you frequented the other places I'm in (some of you are), you may miss the "good stuff"
Thus, I've decided I'm going to post links on a feedback thread so that anybody [who cares] can click on it and keep up with the directions I take Porky, even if they aren't a part of the e-fed I'm posting in.
I will say this: this promo is important for two reasons. The first because it explores Porky and who he is as a character, which will help people understand. And the second reason is mostly important to me because its the first promo I've written with Porky. NvL just celebrated his second birthday a few weeks ago, but Porky is a fairly new creation.
Thus, read if you wish, and I'd love to hear your feedback for this one especially, since its my first one with a new character and all.
And be sure to expect many more of these posts.
