Thaddeus Grey Feedback

[Bondo]

Anybody got a few minutes to offer some criticism for this character? I've handled him a couple of times before, and I've enjoyed it every time. (Although each time has never been more than a couple of months at most!)

I've got the backstory figured out; I'm slowly re-incorporating that into my RP's. And about every/other one will include him in his therapist's office hashing out something that's getting to him.

Also this week I introduced a little side-project I'm working on.

So yeah, anybody got any and all kind of feedback for me? It'd be greatly appreciated!

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"Analyze This" [Intro RP/5-Way Fray]

"It Was About Me" [6-man Tag]

"From Dreamland to Reality..." [Versus Crowe]

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I've included each RP and will update it after every show. I really want this character to succeed, so as I said, any and all feedback (including the good and the bad) is greatly, extremely, hugely appreciated.

If it's super good feedback, I guarantee a backrub from Benny (no guarantee of a Happy Ending, however)!

[Jerry]

I really enjoy this character. The first cd scene where the therapist turned out to be his mother was fantastic. I know the second rp was kind of last minute with things not working out with you and Crowe. The third rp again was excellent, especially when you consider kind of knowing that Crowe might no show.

The CD is very interesting and I'm hooked. We all need more Grey in our lives. I think you definitely have a winner with him.

[Bondo]

Thank you sir, when I have a little more time, I shall indeed back your feed. Or summat.