Dragons feedback

[styg]

Oh man, I missed this forum!

UK Dragons, round 1 of Dynamic Duos: The UK Dragons Say Hello. Hello!

And round 2: Don't you know people write songs about boys like you?

Obviously any feedback is valuable, but in particular I'm curious as to whether the subtleties of the characters' personalities are coming across correctly. I hope I'm not assuming more familiarity with the characters than the FGA audience will have.

I'll try and feedback people if I get the time ^_^

[Vinny]

I definitely want to make a point to give you some legit feedback (I'm heading out the door right now), but I will say right now that I thought your RP was great.

[styg]

Also for Jay, I guess? The three this week are obviously connected, and ideally read in the order indicated. That's how the reveal of information is designed to go.

But hopefully it won't be a problem if they're read in a different order.