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Post by Jerry on Aug 29, 2013 17:52:44 GMT -5
As I said before, Marx is my favorite between these two. His gruffy, battle hardened self his always on full display and you write him perfectly. His mysterious past is also something that draws me to him. His shoot on The Murder is probably the best shoot against them I've read personally, and it is the standout piece imo. Great job! Are you calling me old?    Really, thanks for the compliment. I actually have to thank Vinny a lot for his feedback as I think these were better than my previous rps. Shit, Benny and Vinny are friggin' tough as hell as I just told them on Twitter. I had a lot of fun with these rps and I like this feud. Hopefully they're enjoying it too. |
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Post by Vinny on Aug 31, 2013 12:29:27 GMT -5
Your Marx RP this week was probably the best one I've read from you. You really gave me a lot to work with and the competition is real tough this week. Great work.
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Post by Jerry on Oct 24, 2013 21:55:08 GMT -5
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Post by Jensen Banks on Oct 25, 2013 9:19:12 GMT -5
I really liked your CD in this promo. Wanted to have me read even more. The promo...I think you did pretty well on it. They are saying that they are resilient. Marx is better as a face than Tryon atm, but I can tell Tryon has learned his lesson and will eventually become a damn good face.
All in all, good stuff.
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Post by Jerry on Nov 6, 2013 0:04:57 GMT -5
Feedback for 14 : Sins Forgiven?
I went for a bit of an angrier tone with this one for a couple of reasons. I wanted to tell a story of Tryon struggling with the face turn. I think that it was Spiro who had said a couple of times that he's still having a hard time seeing him as face and liking Marx better. So I figured, lets tell that story.
I also wanted to compliment the SMWB handler on his rp. I wasn't expecting the angrier, more dangerous Mario's. I thought it was very well done and I felt like they really threw the challenge out to the Suspects. Therefore I thought the tone from both of them should be more intense than I had really expected it to be.
Hopefully I didn't stray too far back into the heel realm, but just blurred the lines a little for this match. But I'll let you guys be the judge of that. I honestly loved writing this rp.
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Post by Jensen Banks on Nov 6, 2013 8:35:57 GMT -5
I said that Marx was more established as a face, but I could see Tryon slowly making his way to face status.
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Post by Jerry on Nov 6, 2013 9:12:47 GMT -5
I said that Marx was more established as a face, but I could see Tryon slowly making his way to face status. Same thing.  figured there was a story there. |
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