J to the K to the arma feedback

[Johnny Karma]

based on what I've done (one promo, some character development promos, and a couple of on-cards) what's the consensus of The Man, The Myth, The Johnny Karma thus far?

[Johnny Karma]

Don't stand in silent awe at the greatness of Johnny Karma, some feedback would be appreciated.

Oh, wait, this is an OOC board isn't it?

So, uhh, yeah...feedback?

[Deleted]

I'll get to you after I post my first promo hopefully today

[Deleted]

Hmm, I'm not sure what I can say of any value.

Very solid trash talk in my opinion. Not too long, not too short, far from bland and you neither resort to crudeness or vulgarity, which is always nice.

What might be considered a weakness is the format of Karmic TV and whether or not it will become stale and ineffective. You're what, 3 rps in(?) and it's still fresh, so yay. Hopefully you have a plan on what to do if this worst case scenario does arise.

You have the colours covered so I can't say "moar colours!" like some people suggest. So, instead, I shall also fall back on my own personal qualm, I've learned nothing about neither Johnny nor Cherry as a person from anything I've read so far. It may not be your style, I understand that. And, as performers, wrestlers, whatever you want to refer to them as, you're doing a great job. But I always welcome more dimensions of the people I'm reading about ... scratch that, most of the time I welcome more dimensions, some characters I just don't care about lol

VERDICT: You can do it!
/end Rob Schneider Impression

[Johnny Karma]

Yeesh, was it really the best part of six months ago when I posted this?

Oh well, so, anyone have some more up-to-date feedback?

(And, yeah, I know the most recent RP was all over the place - I've been sleep deprived on and off for the last couple of weeks!)

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The only difference from my previous feedback would be if I criticize you for breaking the fourth wall slightly in your rp after the FGA/Frontier show; where you had Karma say it was a stand in because the write used moves that aren't in Karma's arsenal.

Otherwise you still have solid promos, you shine in segments. You get your sleep cycle back on track and I'll look forward to reading more of your rps.