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Post by Bob Pooler on Feb 6, 2013 18:38:54 GMT -5
Hey guys,
So I've really been sucking with roleplaying in FGA lately, sorry for that, but this week I managed to get something up ahead of deadline! I'd spent the past year or so using a different character so I've almost needed to get the ring rust off writing as myself as much as 'Bob' needed to get the ring rust off himself before stepping back into the ring.
Just looking for a little feedback about how things looked and whatnot.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 6, 2013 18:49:52 GMT -5
Love it dude. I love the history between Bomber and Pooler. Cant wait to see if that story continues here or if its just a tease lol.
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Post by Vinny on Feb 8, 2013 23:26:45 GMT -5
I liked it, but I wanted more. I've been out of the loop on account of dropping off the grid and all so I didn't know Pooler was facing Bomber until I read Ry-Guy's comment above. I didn't know who Oliver was. It might just be me, but I like each RP/promo to stand on its own if possible. I thought it was good at explaining the back story but I didn't really get any full sense of who Bob is or why he is so pissed at Oliver.
I think Bob has his voice down, but I don't think we have enough idea of who Bob is yet.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 9, 2013 5:24:49 GMT -5
As someone who knew the history, I found these rps to be thoroughly enjoyable romps. Someone between what John said on Twitter about the intensity and what Vinny said above; I know that Oliver is Bomber and Bomber is Oliver, but until he rp'ed did the fans know that? The narrative where he described his mindset was pleasant, the bed scene with Holli was a nice set up. Although more bewbs in the future, please. Not Bob's though. You're finding your feet again after your extended period as Alyx (who I do prefer btw  ) but I see good things if you can stay focused and remember when deadline is. *cheap shot* |
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Post by thelion on Feb 22, 2013 22:05:47 GMT -5
Just read "So you wanna' Start a Revolution."
I dig the Bob Pooler character. He comes off as a strong face, but like Ryan and one other guy who RP'ed, I wish you guys would set a scene or something and put some action in it.
That's cool though, using a little imagination, I put Bob in the roof of the Manhattan Center, overlooking the NY skyline while talking the promo.
The only objection I have is, you point out alot of heel characters in a positive light, even though Leon is... complicated.. at the moment. But I do like how you point out that they could be in places much bigger than FGA, promoting the importance of the promotion as a whole as a place to come to compete, rather than make the big bucks.
All in all, solid RP even without a backdrop or body language and expressions.
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Post by Bob Pooler on May 23, 2013 11:46:06 GMT -5
ordinarily I hate asking for feedback, but I guess I'm just looking for an idea of how things are going. I've gone through a bit of a change, character wise, so it'll be important for me to see if I'm making a proper transition beginning with the SuperFriends all the way to the Murder and Pride Championship matches (0-2 sucks).
Thanks in advance guys and gals!
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Post by Bob Pooler on Jun 7, 2013 5:30:10 GMT -5
Bond and I tried something new this week, just seeing if it worked/didn't work/kind of worked/could have used more bacon ???
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Post by Jerry on Jun 7, 2013 9:32:40 GMT -5
No, it definitely worked. As I said in his feedback thread I felt you two had the rps of the week. Absolutely excellent stuff from both of you.
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Post by Bob Pooler on Jun 7, 2013 17:28:29 GMT -5
thanks buddy!
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Post by The Rogue on Jun 7, 2013 17:51:01 GMT -5
Beautiful
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Post by Vinny on Aug 16, 2013 22:12:27 GMT -5
Hey Bob,
Since you asked for feedback in the shoutbox I thought I'd oblige.
I loved the RP. I think you've done a great job of taking a character like Pooler, who superficially seems so at odds with the concept of the Murder, and made them work together. And I'm not just talking about the #Mark4Murder shirt either. There's a sense to the guys in the Murder that the whole is greater than the sum of the parts, and that is just about the only thing that keeps them from unraveling. I think that's most evident in Pooler. He's the guy who had his own success, but he's comfortable flying the colors because look at where it's gotten him. He's on (or near) the top again.
I love your shoots. They're wonderfully narcissistic and condescending. The minor tweaks that turn a cocky babyface into a douchebag heel are so believable in this character.
Great stuff.
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) but I see good things if you can stay focused and remember when deadline is. *cheap shot* 
